raymond alexander kukkee
"You'll not be leaving whilst breathing" the voice said. Heavy breathing echoed in the empty white galley, a harsh, rattling fight for air.
"Nothing to say?"
" It's disgusting," he gasped, "... is it the only way,....the gagging,
the choking? "
"It's final, you
chose, nobody cares".
Stale air whistled as
it was exhaled.
"You made choices, your desire for evil, now
pay" the voice said, "That's hardball".
"You'll not be
leaving with air in that sick rack you call a body. Now be a man."
The sickening rattle ceased, quieting the heaving
galley with silence and salt water.
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'Desire' -with a word
count of 99, was inspired by Red's M3 Flash Fiction Challenge. The word limit was
100 words.
Is that Incoming I hear?
A dark entry. Very nice. Tweaks the imagination.
ReplyDeleteRed.
Thanks, Red, just exercising alternative genres...and holding my breath, just in case. ":)
DeleteInteresting :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, DYM, glad you enjoyed this weird offering...":) ~R
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